User talk:TMXX0818

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Welcome

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Hello TMXX0818! Welcome to Wikivoyage.

To help get you started contributing, we've created a tips for new contributors page, full of helpful links about policies and guidelines and style, as well as some important information on copyleft and basic stuff like how to edit a page.

If you are a Wikipedian, then you may notice some differences in policies and the style of our articles. These include:

It may also be very useful for you to check out Wikivoyage:Welcome, Wikipedians. If you need help, take a look at Wikivoyage:Help, or else post a message in the Wikivoyage:Travellers' pub, as a reply below or on my talk page. Thanks for contributing!

Please also have a look at Wikivoyage:Links to Wikipedia (we don't use many, and only in specific circumstances) and Wikivoyage:Small city article template (which you deviated from, understandably because you're a new user).

Let us know if you have any questions.

All the best,

Ikan Kekek (talk) 10:27, 24 September 2023 (UTC)Reply

TMXX0818, if you haven't look at Wikivoyage:Links to Wikipedia yet, please look at it now. If you have looked at it, look at it again. Also, try to avoid sentences like "Yangzigou Scenic Area is located in Luanchuan County, Luoyang City, Henan Province." Just tell us how far it is from Luanchuan township (I guess that's where the city center is?), in what direction, and how someone can get there. Ikan Kekek (talk) 09:57, 6 October 2023 (UTC)Reply
Thank you for your suggestion. I will modify it after reading it. TMXX0818 (talk) 10:51, 6 October 2023 (UTC)Reply
Good, thanks. Ikan Kekek (talk) 11:12, 6 October 2023 (UTC)Reply

Remember, add content useful to travelers, not encyclopedic trivia

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Such trivia as this belongs in Wikipedia, not here:

"Luanchuan Bus Station is a large-scale station that integrates passenger transportation services, cargo source organization and freight information services, transportation safety management, and logistics support services. Luanchuan Bus Station is an important bus station in the southern region of Luoyang City, and also a regional long-distance bus station that is a key construction point for improving urban transportation in Luoyang. It has important positive significance for improving Luanchuan transportation. Luanchuan Bus Station is a county-level passenger station with the largest scale, the most complete facilities, the largest passenger flow, and the most complete transportation routes in the southern region of Luoyang. It is an important transportation node bus station in the southern region of Luoyang, and is of great significance for improving the transportation network of the southern Nanyang and Sanmenxia areas in Luoyang."

And I hope you didn't copy and paste it from somewhere - if you did, please read Wikivoyage:Copyleft and don't do it again. What travelers care about are things like where to buy and how to buy tickets (if that's not obvious), where to wait, how to get from the bus station to wherever they might stay, and where they might get a bus from. Ikan Kekek (talk) 05:19, 30 September 2023 (UTC)Reply

Peer review of Understanding Small and Big Data article

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The content is good and complete! But it would be nice to add some more content to the buy section!AYAO32269 (talk) 13:27, 5 November 2023 (UTC)Reply